This week for reading we redid our explorer writing and made it Funny and Better here is mine. I made it better by making it funny and more interesting so that people would read it.
Hi Nikau it's Ry. Haha that looks pretty funny, I wonder if Stink Apes really do exist...that would be a terrible place for your holiday with them around. And yes your reflection is hideous in a puddle (just kidding haha) Maybe next time you could come up with more hilarious ideas like this. Goodbye.
Hi Nikau, I like your reading work, I thought it was very funny. I like the words you have used to describe the apes with the horrible stench. I also think the pictures you used were funny. Next time I think you could put a bit more writing into your work. Did anyone else go into the jungle and find the treasure?
Hi Nikau it's Ry. Haha that looks pretty funny, I wonder if Stink Apes really do exist...that would be a terrible place for your holiday with them around. And yes your reflection is hideous in a puddle (just kidding haha) Maybe next time you could come up with more hilarious ideas like this.
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Hi Nikau,
ReplyDeleteI like your reading work, I thought it was very funny. I like the words you have used to describe the apes with the horrible stench. I also think the pictures you used were funny. Next time I think you could put a bit more writing into your work. Did anyone else go into the jungle and find the treasure?