Tuesday 8 November 2016

T4 W5 Writing Reflection



This week for writing I wrote what kind of magic creature I would like to be. I would like to be a dragon that has a hoard of golden treasure. Next time I'm going to make it more awesome. I'm going to make it better by putting in more detail and what it looks like. 



2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Nikau, it's me Marshall. Wow that dragon in the picture looks awesome but it doesn't look friendly towards the deer! But if you cold chose how long it would live for how long would it be? poroporoaki (goodbye)

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  2. Hi Nikau, Ry again. This looks cool and I think the idea of a nature dragon sounds cool, I chose a dragon for my activity as well but mine was dark not nature. I wonder if dragons have actual names that would be cool what would you call your dragon if it had a name mine would be called Eldrago.
    Poroporoaki (Goodbye)

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