Friday 19 October 2018

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As I walk towards the carnival I feel damp grass under foot. when I got closer I could hear people talking and laughing. I could smell the rich aroma of the food as I walked past the crowd. As I got to some of the games I could hear children nagging there parents to have a go.when I got to the ferris wheel I hop on and end up at the top. The ice cold wind rushes past me and makes me feel as if I am froze

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