This week for reading we redid our explorer writing and made it Funny and Better here is mine. I made it better by making it funny and more interesting so that people would read it.
Hi Nikau, I like your reading work, I thought it was very funny. I like the words you have used to describe the apes with the horrible stench. I also think the pictures you used were funny. Next time I think you could put a bit more writing into your work. Did anyone else go into the jungle and find the treasure?
Hi Nikau,
ReplyDeleteI like your reading work, I thought it was very funny. I like the words you have used to describe the apes with the horrible stench. I also think the pictures you used were funny. Next time I think you could put a bit more writing into your work. Did anyone else go into the jungle and find the treasure?